The fact that Hansel and Gretel are in the city is an observation that is necessary to the understanding of this commercial. Right off the bat they do not look like they belong. Lederhosen in the city? Come on! That’s not feasible. A cop would stop them since the way they are dressed and being unsupervised if this was reality. When Gretel drops the bread it is instantly devoured by the environment. The pigeons eat the bread, which would not happen if Hansel and Gretel were in the forest where they belong. There are no sewer grates for the bread to be lost down in the forest either.
The fairy tale has been totally removed from context by AT&T to prove a point. In the original fairy tale the bread is lost and they arrive at the gingerbread house with the witch who plans on eating Hansel. The AT&T cell phone saves the duo from this doom in the commercial hence changing the entire fairy tale. AT&T shows through this commercial that it can help avoid a cell phone user becoming lost most of all, but also the ability to steer them clear of potential danger.
Your voice is great and keeps the readers attention. Focus more on your main point and do not stray off topic.
ReplyDeleteI like your voice in here as well. However, your sentence structures seem weird to me. For example, read your last sentence in the second paragraph aloud.
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