First of all it needs al to of trimming. I'm not sure how I am going to link it all together transition wise and that worries me. It definitely became contemplative and a string of stories. I also think I need to figure out if i'm going to write about barnstable or just cape cod in general
It may be better to start on a broader perspective (all of Cape Cod) and work your way into a less general area such as Barnstable.
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