Cape Cod is not like a pristine beach. Our beaches when left untended are populated by blunt guts, needles and the occasional homeless man. It isn’t uncommon to find a dead fish or seal washed up on shore and even a human body isn’t that big a surprise. The tourists leave and the filth starts accumulating again left by your corrupt businessman, his nose powdered, when stopping with his mistress to take another hit or your homeboy wannabe in his blacked out suburban peddling pot to kids in middle school.
I think this piece would benefit from shorter sentences to make each of your points clearer. I get lost when you change the subject that you are describing in the middle of the sentence.
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